The Diary Of Me
Content: (17/30) I found myself skimming through most of it, none of your entries really caught my attention. You could try writing in longer sentences, and not short choppy ones like you usually do. For example, Mr. B is the coolest but I HATE GYM. You could try explaining why Mr. B is the coolest. Your entries are quite long however, that's good. Maybe if you wrote with more emotion I would have enjoyed your writings.
It doesn't help that the first entry I read was entitled Fuck You and the rest had similar titles. Try adding a bit of happiness to your life. You need not be the cynical adolescent you try to make everyone think you are. Life is beautiful. Enjoy it.
Layout: (20/25) Blue with a little drop of water on the top left of the page, though you didn't explain what it symbolizes. It's a neat little one but it could get boring after awhile. The colours don't contrast that much, so it's pretty okay.
Updates: (6/10) You leave out a lot of days, so your reader might get a little lost while reading about you because nothing seems to relate.
Extras: (9/10) Cast page, Bio, Rings, Profile. Not bad. Your rings page is a tad bit too cluttered, though.
Contact: (3/5) Guestbook, Notes, Email.
Errors: (10/10) None I could find.
Bonus: (3/5) Your entries are long.
Returning? (1/5) Nope.
Total: 69/100
Reviewed by Daphne.
