Originaldork
Content: 28/30 I tried really really hard to get into your entries. But I just couldn’t. That’s not entirely your fault. Maybe it is because of the day I had to deal with today, and having to feel so pushed to get your review done. I do like your writing style; even though you tend to jump from one subject to the next without even giving a reason why. Maybe that’s just the way your write. I really liked this entry. I could really relate to you your words and emotions. And then you have other entries that completely lost my interest and I found myself skipping entries to look for a title that grabbed my interest. But that’s just me. You use a lot of emotion in your diary; it’s just rather tiresome at times. I began to become annoyed by your use of internet slang. You use it way too much. Tone down on the “lol” and “lmao” just a tad ok?
Layout: 24/25 A black and white layout; self made I presume? I really like the back squares with the pictures of you (??) Your background is all white, which is like death to my eyes. I can’t stand white, but that’s not your fault. I don’t think that the blue on your drop down menu goes with your layout color. Maybe if you made the blue a gray to match you older entries link below your pages?? I think that would help a lot.
Updates: 9/10 You are very sporadic on your entries, but then you often times have multiples which make up for the lack of your not-so-everyday entries.
Extras: 8/10. Profile, and nothing else. I found your cast list on a separate web site. You should really add that to your diary as well.
Errors: 5/10 Because I have a serious problem with internet slang. It’s not too hard to spell the words “laughing out loud”; or possibly replace it something smaller with the same meaning. You also have a ton of typos. You have internet slang in almost all of your entries.. and that annoyed me. Sorry.
Bonus: 5/5You have your own web site on another link, pictures, and rings.
Contact: 5/5 Email, Notes, and Guestbook.
Return: 3/5 Not because I think your diary is boring, because it isn’t. It just isn’t meant for me.
Total: 87/100 Reviewed by Chrissy
