Schoonie
Content: 25/30 I hate to be the one to break this to you, but your droning monotone of complaining about work extremely bores me. If you don’t like ignorant people calling you, ask for a transfer. Honestly. Most of your other entries fascinated me like your Drunken Stupor I laughed until I had tears streaming down my face. I would like to see you write something with a little more passion, but that’s just me. I have my own quirks I guess.
Layout: 20/25 I like the blue background because it has a soft mellow feeling to it, but the white behind your font really kills my eyes. And the image is nicely equipped and adds a nice touch to your personality. I think it fits you very well. I’m sorry that I had to take points off for the whiteness. It totally made me tired and sleepy. There’s just something about the white background that drowns out your font making it boring and monotonous. Other than that it’s great
Updates: 8/10 I really think I should have taken more off for your lack of updating venues. You have a lot of huge gaps, but most often made up for them with daily multiples. You have a huge grammatical talent; making you come across as being more intelligent that most diary writers. But I had to take off for typos.
Extras: 10/10 Rings, Survey, Guest map, and Calls
Errors: 8/10 You have no Bio on yourself which would really help a lot. I’m not saying that my diary is perfect but a little biography and a Cast would help define who the people are in your diary.
Bonus: 5/5 Perfect Older Entries page
Contact: 5/5 Email, Guestbook, and Notes
Returning: 3/5 Probably not. Sorry. Your content isn’t for my liking. But I still enjoyed reading about your Drunken Stupor. The funniest entry in you entire diary. It takes a lot to make me laugh, so you get 3 points for that.
Total: 87/100 Reviewed by Chrissy
