Scorpio123
Content: 24/30 Your entries are sometimes short and varies to be lengthy at times, depending on your mood or topic. I like you style of writing, but I like a lot of people styles of expression. Each person is their own is it not?
You’re honest in your diary and I like that a lot. It’s hard to be real sometimes because of all the people that read online, but you seem to disregard that and put your feelings out there. Least to be noticed but more as a reflection of yourself and releasing you’re your weaknesses or strengths.
You present yourself as a single rose in a field of weeds, consisting of twelve. You have a hidden talent that’s not really noticeable, but if you look hard enough you’ll find it.
My favorite quote by you is: “I can’t lie anymore. I hate it. I hate where my life is right now, and I hate where it is going. No more lying, I am not happy.”
I relate to those words so well. But from what I have gathered from reading, you’ve come a long way from where you were, and that a good thing.
Layout: 20/25 Its really not my speed, but for you I can relate as to how it benefits you, the childlike version in all of us will forever remain, even as we grow older and become wiser. Credit to Designs Twice. It's a Dear Diary format with little characters with blue hair and light blue and reddish pink links. With a white background. This suits you I’m sure and that fine, but not for myself. It distracts the reader with cute thoughts as you read along in some of your sad entries. Do you want a distraction? What that layout picked for any certain reason?
Either way, your decision is yours alone, and you’re the only one who knows the answer behind. That’s another good thing, leaving the reader guessing.
Updates: 8/10 Used to update quiet regularly until this past month, which is understandable in most cases. You’ve gotten the pint where you update when you want, or feel the need to rather than for an audience.
Extras: 10/10 The norm, plus you have on the right navi bar an I am, Feeling, Listening and Reading section that you have filled out with other thoughts and what not. Good enough. You also have Secret Santa and Secret Valentine links along with a few others down to very bottom of your page.
Errors: 8/10 You have a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but no biggie. It’s all good. You make up for that with your emotional entries.
Bonus: 3/5 You have your buddy list listed on the left of your page, it clutters the prettiness of your page. Try putting it on a separate page and just linking the page itself? Just a thought. You also have a Bio and cast. Good job.
Contact: 5/5 Email, Notes and Book, the norm
Returning: 5/5 You know I’ve already been reading your diary Ness. But I’ve got such a hectic mess now; I could only hope that I had more time to indulge.
Total: 83/100
Reviewed by Chrissy
Favorite entry: I Hate It
