freakymandy
Content:[27/30] The title does not lie, you are freaky. However, you are also an extremely talented writer with an excellent eye for what makes good reading. I would probably call you the John Malkovich of the diary world, I don't know why, but that was a thought that kept coming into my head.
You have great, logical, reasoned writing, but there is so much mystery in what you say. You're probably thinking, 'christ, what a nut', but you are so incredibly talented, and I sincerely hope this does not go to waste. The talk of constipation...hmm. Well, not really a dinner subject, but you manage SOMEHOW to make it slightly tasteful, and add another element to what would normally be a topic where I scream in protest for the writer to stop.
The only things that you have to work is is developing your writing to another level, talking about more things, and avoiding recap of the days events, which is hard when you're a student and have no life besides studying [:)], however, this would surely take your skills somewhere else again. Another thing that I would work on is to lengthen your entries, or perhaps only update when you have something to say and write a bit more about what you think. Other than that, this diary is growing, and will continue to do so.
You're only fourteen. That's amazing.
Layout:[23/25] I really like the layout, it suits your diary, your style of writing, and also it's neat and user friendly. Great navigation and all that jazz. Good work. Even a pull down navigation menu. Excellent.
Updates:[10/10] Every day, multiples to make up for the occassional day missed, excellent.
Extras:[10/10] A list of your favourite songs int eh archive section (I'm a fan), sitemeter, private messages archived seperately, song list (play list), a thinking list, wishlist, diary rings, cast, reviews, biography, poetry links, review site link, links links links.
Errors:[10/10] Out of all the links? none.
Contact:[5/5] MSN, Notes, email, guestbook.
Bonus:[4/5]Extra marks for marrying an atmosphere perfectly with a layout.
Returning:[3/5]Yes, I shall. You're an Aussie, which is also good to see..particularly if you're a Sydney sider like me.
Total: 92/100 Reviewed by Kathleen
