girlunderglass
Content:[30/30] This writing can best be considered as just prose. I read it from a detached perspective- it did not feel like a personal recount. It instead felt more like an exercise in writing. That's not to say that the writing in this journal I even saw this diary as a story--a very enjoyable and depressing one. The diarist shows an immense talent for constructing her life through powerful poetic sentences. This is one diary that i will continue to read, because it's just like reading a book.
There's not much to say because I wouldn't change a thing.
AND YOU'RE FIFTEEN??? My god girl, I'm falling over in jealousy. And I review harshly.
Layout:[17/25] I would change as much as possible about the layout, however. The pink checks turned me off your wonderful writing. And that's not someting you want. From a design point of view, yes, they are effective, but they're not practical. The image is good, and the text a little too small. Enlarge the text box, make the picture more of a focus and use easier colours on the eyes.
Updates:[9/10]Every few days, sometimes every day. It all depends on inspiration- which is great to see.
Extras:[3/10] An about page, links and reviews. That's more or less about it.
Errors:[10/10] Notta one.
Contact:[3/5] Guestbook, email and AIM.
Returning:[5/5] Of course. I'll probably add your livejournal, if that's ok.
