msspyndryft
Content: [10/30]
Nick did this. Yay. John did that. Yay. I did this. Yay. Josh did this. Yay.
Now, seeing as this is what these entries primarily consist of, what deduction could we make from my summary of this diary? That it's redundant, boring, mindless, agigtating and moronic.
And so goddamn boring.
Now most know that I am NOT a fan of recap. I am definitely not a fan of recap when it consists solely of listing things people I don't know did. Saving this girl's arse is the fact that she has a cast page. Had you not, this diary would have been past reading and definitely past reviewing. There is really nothing substantial to review anyway. Just boring, fucking recap. When will you people learn that no-one cares that so and so climbed a tree, or another person ate cheese? Particularly if we are not given the opportunity to know anything substantial about them.
My advice for the future:
-Start afresh.
-Stop recapping.
-Emotions - learn what they are and start to express them.
-Stop telling us the mundane shit.
You have writing skills, that is obvious. But you can't demonstrate it when you write shit all.
You're five days older than me. Congratulations on that one.
Layout:[13/25] Uggghhhhh, text only links!!! Text only links!! No huge, hideous boxes with cartoon women in them telling me the temperature! No! It's tacky! it doesn't go with your layout, so why would you stick it on there? God knows. Put it on an extras page. Other than that ugly, ugly, mistake, this layout is nothing special. I assumed it's self designed, but it's not! how mortifiying. It's just a bunch of boxes. Boring, but seeing as your entries are boring too, it suits your content, and you have been awarded accordingly.
Updates:[10/10] Everyday, or every few days. Often enough for me.
Extras:[9/10] I give you credit for having an extra link with everything behind closed doors. That adds less clutter, which is ultimately what you want so as not to distract from the writing. Trading card, cast page, links, readers, surveys, reviews, guestmaps, dreamjournal, 101 things about me, calendar....so we can PREDICT tomorrow's recap!!
Errors:[10/10] I can't count that hideous box thing as an error, so none.
Contact:[5/5] Notes, guestbook, email, AOL, Yahoo, MSN.
Bonus:[0/5] Nothing worth noting. I'm impressed that there is someone out there who thinks george w. bush is cool, so power to you, I guess.
Returning:[0/5] When I start disgareeing with abortion is when I'll return to this site. Ie- NEVER.
Total: 57/100 Reviewed by Kathleen
