nervoustears
content 27/30 Hmm. You write like a 13 year old girl, that's for sure. I don't quite know how to... get into it, tho.
layout 7/25 Shoot, straight away, I get a broken image for your image box. That really bums me out. Hmm, going back a page, the layout is completely different. Did you find a new layout? If so, why didn't you change it so all the older pages have that same layout? I think when you leave it like such, it makes it look... untaken care of. In fact, I went back another page and the layout is different again. I am NOT understanding the change of layouts all the darn time. Not to mention, your archive page layout is different than the rest.
extras 7/10 Application, profile, Buddies, Employers, Fav. Entries, Recommend, Chat Dland, Search Dland. You have these extras, which is nice, but the chat dland and search dland just.. seem... like.. I dont know, they dont need to be there. It makes it look... tacky. (in my humble opinion)
updates 7/10 Sometimes you update daily but sometimes you go 5 or 6 days without an update. I think 2 or 3 days is too long to go without people losing interest in your diary.
errors 5/10 Well.. the broken image.. the changing of layouts all the time. Your next link doesn't work either. It takes you to the current entry. ALL THE TIME! It's a hard diary to grasp.
contact 4/5 Email, AIM, notes, guestbook. I do feel you would benefit if you put a link to your guestbook under the other contact links. I almost missed your guestbook link.
bonus 5/5 You DO have the link to review-world. That gets all the bonus points.
returning 0/5 No, sorry. :(
total 65/100 Just put a little bit of work.. a little bit of heart.. into your diary then come back and ask for a new review. I would be happy to re-review you.
Reviewed by Tangy
