Content: (28/30) I really like how you began your diary. You write in a beautiful way, with entries long enough to get fulfilled. Entries like this are what the diary is about. Expressing thoughts, feelings, and emotions, which is exactly what a diary is for. But when you read an entry like this, you just want to chuckle because it seems like this writer is so beyond the typical, gimme hits person. I guess we all have it in us. She has very strong opinions on controversial items and she isn't afraid to say what she thinks. And although we never think that she would write something like this we just have to laugh at her humor, something not frequently found in her opinionated diary.

All in all, the writing is great, and although she has her days when we don't find the entries as great as the previous one, we still read on because it has an addictive quality.

Layout: (17.5/25) It's a Lucky Design. I remember surfing in to your diary previously. So for some reason this time, the image on your diary had disappeared. So you have a blank black hole on the left side of your diary. Which would be okay, if the diary entries were center or your links were on the left. But there was just nothing there. And there wasn't a broken image. So I don't know. Your previous and next links at the top do not work. Your Wicca ring? It should be on the page with all the other rings. On your older page? The short description, time, and all that towards the top does not work at all (though it should even be there). I also suggest you archive the older page and make sure that you have the same links on your older page as on your entry page.

Updates: (6/10) not completely regular, multiple entries, but not enough to make up for all the misses.

Extras: (10/10) reviews, photos, rings, about me, etc.

Errors: (10/10) No obvious errors, except for what I mention in the layout section.

Bonus: (2/5) The writing and poetry is awesome. Good job!

Contact: (4/5) guestbook, notes, email, notify list.. maybe you should make a contact page. It would look better than having the notify list thing right above your page because that draws away from the actual layout.

Returning? (4/5) Probably will come back and see how things are going.

Total: 81.5/100

Reviewed by: Megan

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