rezzette
This diary gets my award for most improved diary in the past six months, wow.
Content: (Content has two marks as started reviewing bout four months ago. earlier mark is[10/30]. edited mark is [26/30]
NOTE: Time has passed since I started reviewing this diary. I thought I would include my previous thoughts to show you how much your writing has changed. Your edited mark is 26/30. While this is still not the best and your writing is borderline contrived, there is so much development. In the past few months you have allowed your viewers to know more about you. And that is a much better thing. Ask for a re-review if you are still interested later on, becuase I have a feeling that this mark will rise to 30/30. You have strayed far from tedium. Good for you!
Oddly enough, I have fallen in love with this diary an enjoyed watching your writing journey. You've grown up so much, and the fact that you're still young shows that you have a great talent. PLease, have a laugh at the change in heart I have had.... The old opinion:
So I stumbled into the life of Rezette, and I have never deeply regretted something more. This diary not only manages to bore every bone in your body, but the desperate attempts made to have lyrical and eloquent writing are about as successful as Gwyneth Paltrow's singing career. And even more painful.
Yes, the author is relatively young, and this has been taken into account. But I live with people the same age as rezette. I have a few friends the same age as Rezette, but none of them manage to bore the absolute pants off of me.
I think my boobs are growing!!
Well, wow, I'll tune into CNN for the latest. I strongly suggest to anyone who wants to stumble across this diary, don't bother, and just read a book on your standard case of puberty. This diary presents nothing interesting, and in the words of the writer:
Eh...it was pathetic
Maybe this is being a bit harsh. Perhaps, but the writer has submitted herself at the scrutiny of the reviewers, please keep that in mind when no doubt a barrage of insults will ensue.
Tales of 'so and so said this, and I was like, wow, while there was classical music wafting softly through my head', are running rampant in this diary. If that's your thing, go ahead and read it. But according to the marking scheme of this review site, this writer has failed miserably. It's unfortunate, as there is some element of promise in rezette's writing, but her entries are mindlessly boring and emotionless that it's impossible to appreciate any story she spiels. No doubt, she will grow, and I highly suggest that she returns when she has come out of her teen angst stage and had furthered what uniqueness is evident in her words. You do have promise, you do. But according to the marking scheme, I can't mark you highly.
And the reason the nurse says, 'Think of me when you shave your legs' in Girl, Interrupted, is because when Susanna shaves her legs, the nurse has to sit and watch her. That's why. It's what is called a humourous fleeting comment to mask inner pain and sadness.
Layout:[22/25] When I started reviewing this diary you had a poodesigns layout that was incredibly boring. Your change of layout suits the dramatic change in your writing. It's neat and it suits you. I like it.
Updates:[9/10] Moreorless every second day. The entries are comfortable in length.
Extras:[10/10]There is alot to suit this diary. Each lets the viewer have another insight into the diarist. There is a long bio, neat archives, rings, quizzes, surveys, reviews, a cast page, and then her own extras. All of these are easy to access which doesn't make the extras a burden on time.
Errors:[10/10] Not one, this is so well maintained.
Contact:[5/5] Email, notes, guestbook, AIM.
Bonus:[3/5] The continuity of this site, the colours, themes and writing all seem to come to a general atmosphere.
Returning:[5/5] When I started reviewing this diary, I would have said no. That's the reason I have icnluded my past thoughts. But the change that this diarist has undertaken shows so much talent, charisma and excellent writing skills- which at her age is to be commended. I have gradually become quite a fan of this diary.
Total:90/100 Reviewed by kathleen
