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content 24/30 Your entries are very short and straight to the point which can be good in some ways and not so good in others. You always feel the need to express your love for Mike, which I think is adorable and I remember the feeling of being in love. I’m glad you’re enjoying it!
You’re honest in your diary and I like that a lot. It’s hard to be real sometimes because of all the people that read online, but you seem to disregard that. You also moved your diary from diary-x which is another way to do it!
I love this line out of your bio: “I try not to throw stones because I am clearly living in a glass house.”
You give off the impression of having a somewhat mysterious (but disturbing) past. It keeps readers intrigued and wanting to read more in case of finding out a bit more. It’s a very interesting and nice element to have in your diary! It separates you from other diaries out there.
You’ve had lots of diaries! You posted the entries from them and while it’s always fun looking back on them, maybe you could have put them off to the side behind a link maybe? Just a recommendation!
layout 15/25 [I’m grading the Jennifer Lopez layout since you seem to change it a lot.]
An interesting picture of J.Lo. Not sure if I like it too much though, she has lots of other good pictures to choose from, but then again this is your page not mine. I like the purple-blue color scheme. The one pet peeve of mine with every website is the scroll bars. When you can’t see the scroll it bugs me! Maybe you can adjust that so the scroll is visible!
The font is pretty small, it’d be easier to read if it was bigger. And the right margin of the text goes right up against the picture, is there a way to adjust that to bring it over a bit? Everything else is great, very organized.
updates 10/10 Great!
extras 11/10 Bio, pics, one word responses (I’ve never heard of this- a neat website!), links, zines, recipes, strategies (great idea), reads/links, rings, notify list, comment box, book, dland stuff. Wow!
errors 10/10 Didn’t catch anything.
bonus 5/5 I’m assuming since you didn’t link a designer that you did it yourself, so props to you for that.
contact 6/5 Excellent. The contact link makes it easier too!
returning 2/5 Maybe to check in and see how things are going. Make the font bigger and easier to read and maybe I’ll be more willing to come back! =)
total 83/100
Reviewed by Emily
