Sunflowerluv
Content: 30/30 Your writing comes across to me in many ways. You have that ability to draw people in, whether it be about nothing or something random. I felt the need to reach out and give you a hug from time to time. You are really dealing with a lot in your life right now. You had one great entry that I could really profoundly relate to. Life is exactly how you portrayed in your entry
"A splashing wave dies on the shore and from its shades and silver foam a new one goes back into the ocean. Time passes by like waves on shores…. I feel the passion for one soul and then I hear some whispers while I am alone. …Strength and luck go hand in hand when talking about future minds. There was one orchid in a vase. The vase is broken into shades. A splashing wave, the rhythm of the falling rain within the whispers of the ocean."
Oh how I could relate to that one paragraph. I love that way you write and bring forth your expressions, it’s as if you are writing to an audience of nature. You writing reminds me of novels I have read; and that is a great achievement. Well done.
Layout: 25/25 I like the Bridget Jones layout very much, but I have a tendency to not like white. It’s nothing against you, I assure you. There’s just something about a white background that makes me fall asleep, and making the person content boring. I like the rest of your layout very much. It suits your image and how you reflect your self through your writing.
Updates: 9/10 You update every few days, sometimes with big gaps, sometimes with not too big gaps. I could tell it was all depending on how your studies were going. You tend to have a very busy schedule for an 18 year old. But still all in all a good job.
Extras: 10/10 Surveys, Tag your it, Diarist net, Rings and more..
Errors: 9/10 You a few internet slang, but not too much to worry about. I am still stumped on the “Sth” What does that mean? Enlighten my old brain, please. And your page took a little while to load, but that probably can’t be helped.
Contact: 5/5 Notes, Email and Guest book
Bonus: 5/5 Imood and Craving
Return: 5/5 Yes I most certainly will. I would like to know how everything turns out with Victor and Duc …and Hawaii.
Total: 98/100 Reviewed by Chrissy
